Score: 10

"HOORAY!"

submission: 21 OClockStreetTheMovie 2

date: June 9, 2005

That was INCREDIBLE! You followed up the first with something even better - it flowed perfectly, the storyline didn't fade out, the violence was great, the scripting on the quick movement and blurs added so much, the menu was great (which got you an 'Interactivity' 10 rating), it was funny, and I can't believe I just added my first favourite 'Clock' movie! This is worth a daily award and a weekly award, but in a week that's already had some incredible submissions, it may get less than it deserves. I hope this gets a good Daily Award, and a Weekly Award too.

Score: 8

"I'm surprised..."

submission: 21 OClockStreetTheMovie 1

date: June 9, 2005

Many of the Clock movies are just down-classed because they are following a style that is hated by many. Usually, I find clock movies either diabolical because they have been just strung together quickly, or average entertainment, but this was an exception.

Very good storyline, which made me watch it all, although some could argue it was a bit simplistic, with not much of a plot, but I would say it was an enjoyable story, which all viewers could follow and understand.

The graphics were well thought-out and were not slap-dash in anyway at all, and you continued the 'Clock Crew' style well. I think you have given the Clock image a boost, and people may now respect the name more, because this was a very good, entertaining and interesting Flash movie.

Score: 8

"JOKES!"

submission: Fun With Fire

date: June 3, 2005

You are one of my fave authors an I was just about to check the credits of 'Up Skit's Creek' to find out what the title of the classical song was with the pope/contraception, and then you submit this, which was pretty hilarious! Love your style and especially the use of sound - but what is that song - the classical one that has the drum? I need to find it! Well done again, and although it's a cliched saying - keep up the good work!

Score: 10

"I never give 10s"

submission: Stirred Not Shaken: TWINE

date: June 3, 2005

... but this was the one of the best Flash movies I have ever seen, and I'm not being n00b-like in saying that. It was HILARRRRRRRIOUSSS! So many jokes, and 'you stupid bint!' - incredible! Great animation too, that didn't let it down, in fact I thought the style and the graphics combined were very successful. The sound quality was flawless, you recorded it all well, and this should and must earn a respectable score that will see it win a weekly award - because it is well above that standard! On to my favourites this goes... congratulations - 95% :D :D :D

Score: 8

"Good Work"

submission: FFVI:The Time Before P-5

date: June 1, 2005

This has fully deserved it's 'review crew pick', and I thought, although I haven't seen the other ones, that this was a good story and well thought out. Congratulations my friend!

Score: 9

"Good Job Glaiel"

submission: Magnetism

date: May 28, 2005

You finished the game well, it was really enjoyable to play, and I'd say quite a unique game, with enough levels to play for a long time - shame many people don't realize this when voting, similar thing happened with my SMASH!: 100. Well guys, this is an enjoyable game, and I have to say 100 Levels or taxing, entertaining and brain-bustingly brilliant gameplay. Well done Glaiel!

Score: 9

"Awe-Struck."

submission: Bones

date: May 23, 2005

This is incredible - the graphics cannot be faulted, the sound is perfect for the movie - it has everything of a quality submission - it has a storyline - and I would happily watch that as a cartoon any day on television - maybe consider a move int o that field - but definitely make a series along these lines. One thing - please, please don't call this -BONES-, because it reminds people of blammable submission names like "_-=*WTF*=-_" and "$"%^*£GOOD". If you renamed it to Bones, it would make a great impression :D

Score: 8

"Nice Improvements..."

submission: Simpsons Home Inter. V5

date: May 22, 2005

This is getting better, and although there is room for improvements in areas, generally you've got all the main parts done, and they could be tweaked, but to be honest, I would maybe do one more version and move onto a different area or something. It's still very cool and well drawn throughout :D I do have a plan for a collab tho, but I'll give you an email at the end of June/beginning of July, when my exams are over and I'll be free to do a project. It's an idea I think you'll like and you will be able to use many skills from the 'Simpsons Home' collections within it. Good Luck until them!

Score: 6

"Good first submission..."

submission: Lago Battle

date: May 21, 2005

For a first-timer, this was well thought-out and was a good clay animation. Good luck with your further work...

Score: 8

"Getting better mate..."

submission: Simpsons Home Inter.V4

date: May 21, 2005

... but you could still improve it:
> Make almost everything clickable, even if it just opens and closes.
> On the loader, don't use that .jpg of Homer (in fact generally I reckon it's better not to use them), it sorta downclasses your animation - just trace it if needs be.
> The 'Resume Tour Of House' button is a bit strange looking and doesn't really fit in - maybe try a cartoony font?
> Maybe make the basement and garage available for viewing.
> I didn't see Grampa or any of the pets - they'd be a great addition.

Lovely drawing work tho, plenty of colours and potential - maybe some day we should do a collaboration... anyway well done, it's a great improvement from the original.

Barno, Smoking Chimney Productions U.K.